Today in the writing process, we have started taking apart our rough draft and revising it. We had a copy of our paper and we tore it up into paragraphs. We analyzed each paragraph individually to see if it was really necessary to the thesis of our paper. The teacher then told us to use the different paragraphs and organize them at least two different ways. She asked to answer the following questions explaining our experience.
How are the set ups of your essay different?
In the set ups of my essay, I changed around the ideas. I tended to bunch together the ideas in the first draft. Instead of doing that I switched them around.
What did I learn?
I learned that there is not only one way of doing things. There are multiple ways to write a paper, but you have make sure that the order still makes sense.
How did the process re-see my essay?
I made me see that some things that I wrote that didn't need to go with the
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